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THE HARVARD UNIVERSITY OPTIONAL ESSAY: WHAT YOU NEED TO KNOW

12/28/2017

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If you’re hoping to attend Harvard next year at this time, there are a few things you should know before pressing send on your application. They are as follows: Harvard University is located in Cambridge, Massachusetts.
96% of students graduate within six years.
Harvard is a medium-sized school with 6,712 total undergrads.
The early action deadline is November 1.
The Ivy League gives students the opportunity to respond to one additional essay in their application.

See more: ​https://www.collegeessayadvisors.com/harvard-university-optional-essay-what-you-need-to-know/

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Write a Graduate School Essay that Will Knock Their Socks Off

12/28/2017

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HOW TO USE YOUR MEMORIES TO FIND THE PERFECT ESSAY TOPIC

12/28/2017

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So you’re working on your college applications and just can’t seem to come up with a good topic for your essay! You hate all of your ideas and you know a good topic is the foundation for a fantastic essay! Don’t panic! Your predicament is quite normal and you’re one of many students sweating your essay topic right now!! The good news is we can help! Here are some tips for using your memories to find the perfect topic:
  1. Go through old photo albums (or your Instagram feed) and brainstorm using pictures as your triggers.
  2. Look around your bedroom – what items jump out to you as things that have meaning? Do this exercise in any place you spend a lot of time. The locker room. The school bus. The library. Your best friend’s house. Your favorite ice cream shop.
  3. Try and jog your memory for the most meaningful events in your life thus far. Think about birthdays and anniversaries. Special visits from long lost friends.  Competitions you won (or lost).
  4. Take your nostalgia for a ride. Up to this point in your life, what have been your most cherished memories and why? You might not end up writing about your seventh grade science fair, but you could unearth a smaller, more significant story to tell.
  5. Don’t be afraid to consult mom and dad. Even if you’re wary of letting your parents in on the brainstorming process, they often remember details you don’t remember or bring up stories you have totally forgotten. (Ours remember many we would like to forget.)
Your golden idea might be right in front of you. Maybe you see the blue ribbon pinned on your bedroom wall that you earned after competing in your swim meet while battling the nastiest cold you’ve ever had. Maybe you want to write about being a team player and a hard worker. Perhaps your dad loves the story of the time you fell flat on your face while dancing on stage at your annual talent show. Perhaps that was the exact moment you realized that performing was your dream and that maybe you shouldn’t wear four inch heels while trying to whip and nae nae. The perfect topic is somewhere in your brain, you just have to know where to look.
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Avoid These 10 Common Grammar Mistakes in Your Paper

12/28/2017

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If you recognize the grammar error in this sign, good for you! The grammar police won’t be handing you a citation this time.

If you don’t recognize the error, the grammar police have officially given you a warning citation. Don’t worry—you can avoid paying any fines by reading this post and learning to recognize this and nine other common grammar mistakes.
I’m sure there are about a bajillion grammar errors you might make in any given paper, but I can’t cover them all in this post. Instead, let’s focus on 10 common grammar mistakes that will help keep the grammar police at bay.


Easily confused wordsSome words sound almost the same and are spelled similarly, so it can be easy to get them mixed up. Here are five sets of words that are easily confused.

1. Then/Than
  • Then generally refers to actions in time.
Example #1: If you don’t finish your paper, then you might fail the course.
Example #2: Emily went to the food court, then headed to the movies.
  • Than is a comparison.
Example #1: John’s car is better than Carl’s.
Example #2: I’d rather enroll in calculus than physics.

2. Effect/Affect
  • Effect means a result.
Example #1: Sunshine can have a great effect on people’s moods.
Example #2: Did the experiment demonstrate an effect on climate change?
  • Affect means to influence.
Example #1: The speakers remarks didn’t affect her opinion.
Example #2: Eating dessert first never affects my appetite.

3. They’re/Their
  • They’re is a contraction for “they are.”
Example #1: They’re going to the concert on Saturday.
Example #2: I hope they’re learning how to avoid grammar mistakes.
  • Their shows possession or ownership.
Example #1: The children wanted their books stacked in the corner.
Example #2: The students hoped their tests would be graded on a curve.

4. Your/You’re
  • Your shows possession or ownership.
Example #1: Where are your car keys?
Example #2: Lara left her books in your room.
  • You’re is a contraction for “you are.”
Example #1: I heard that you’re going on vacation in July.
Example #2: Are you sure you’re driving in the right direction?

5. Its/It’s
  • Its shows possession or ownership.
Example #1: The dog chased its tail.
Example #2: The leopard changed its spots.
  • It’s is a contraction for “it is.”
Example #1: It’s time to board the plane.
Example #2: Lauren said it’s vital to keep the dog away from the crazy cat.
We all know the English language has a seemingly infinite number of confusing words, so if there are a few words that still confuse you, check out this list of easily confused words.


Feel like you’ve mastered all those confusing words but feel the grammar police are ready to fine you heavily for making unnecessary sentence errors? Fear no more. Here are a few tips to help with common grammar errors related to sentence structure.

Sentence errors

6. Comma splice
A comma splice incorrectly separates two or more complete sentences with a comma.
Example: I watched movies all night, I was tired the next morning.
This sentence is a comma splice because “I watched movies all night” and “I was tired the next morning” are both complete sentences and are joined incorrectly by a comma.

7. Run-on sentence
A run-on sentence incorrectly joins two or more complete sentences without any form of punctuation.
Example: The line at the concession was long so we decided not to wait.
This sentence is a run-on sentence because “The line at the concession was long” and “we didn’t want to wait” are both complete sentences but are not joined by proper punctuation. (They are instead joined incorrectly by the conjunction “so.”)
8. Sentence fragment
A sentence fragment is an incomplete sentence that’s missing a subject, a verb, or a complete thought.
Example: Stayed at the hotel.
This sentence is missing a subject, which makes it a sentence fragment.
Correcting sentence errorsCorrect sentence fragments by making sure that all sentences have a subject, a verb, and a complete thought.
Correct comma splices and run-on sentences by using the following strategies.
Create two complete sentences by adding a period:
The car wouldn’t start, the battery was dead. (comma splice)
The car wouldn’t start. The battery was dead.
Correctly join the two sentences by adding a semi-colon:
Jayden and Gabriella got married Saturday it was a beautiful ceremony. (run-on sentence)
Jayden and Gabriella got married Saturday; it was a beautiful ceremony.
Make one of the sentences a dependent clause:
We went outside, we realized it was raining. (comma splice)
When we went outside, we realized it was raining.
Connect two complete sentences by adding a comma and a coordinating conjunction (also known as FANBOYS–for, an, nor, but, or, yet, so):
Sophia called me but I didn’t feel like answering her call. (run-on sentence)
Sophia called me, but I didn’t feel like answering her call.
Still feeling a little nervous? Worried that a member of the grammar police will catch you off guard and find out you’re still confused about apostrophes? Check out these tips on common grammar mistakes with apostrophes.

Apostrophe errors
Apostrophes are most often used in two instances:
  • To form contractions
  • To show possession
Apostrophe tip: NEVER use an apostrophe to make words plural (that includes when using acronyms!).
Ari ordered five pizza’s for the party.
Ari ordered five pizzas for the party.

9. ContractionsAn apostrophe can be used to indicate that letters have been omitted in a contraction. The apostrophe takes the place of the omitted letters.
Examples:
  • Don’t (Do not)
  • Can’t (Cannot or can not, depending on your intended meaning)
  • Won’t (Will not)
  • I’m (I am)
  • Should’ve (Should have)
NOTE: Should’ve, could’ve, and would’ve are grammatically correct. “Could of,” “would of,” and “should of” are not grammatically correct and should never be used.
10. PossessionAn apostrophe can be used to show possession or ownership.
Example #1: the woman’s scarf (the scarf belongs to the woman)
Example #2: the boy’s action figures (the action figures belong to the boy)

Leave the Grammar Police in the Rear-view Mirror

Now that you know how to avoid 10 common grammar mistakes, you can leave the grammar police in the dust…but only if you can recognize the error that I included at the beginning of the post.
Did you recognize the apostrophe error? Did you notice that the apostrophe is used incorrectly because it makes “Mom’s” and “Dad’s” possessive? In this case, both “Moms” and “Dads” should be plural. (No apostrophe is needed.)
Looking for a few more grammar and writing style tips? Read these articles:
Want to test your grammar skills on a few sample papers? See if you can spot any errors in our sample essays.

​Source: Kibin


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